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Monday 18 November 2013

My Best Friend

Hair flows like the waves in the ocean
Eyes as brown as a trunk of a tree
Teeth as white as the clouds
Smile as beautiful as a rose



She’s as kind as an angel
She is cool like the water in a pool
She tried to read a book with a hook
She has a sense of humour and she never tells a rumour



She’s a star but not the colour of tar
She's brave and not afraid to go into a cave
She likes to sit under the tree but she never likes to feel fleas
She isn't  fake and she always helps her mum bake
She likes a horror and she loves to look in the mirror



She likes the beaches in Raro and likes to eat taro
She is from Vaini and when she was born she was very tiny
She can sing and owns lots of diamond rings
She is fast and never comes last

She likes the name Gin and always wins.

3 comments:

Te Puawai said...

Nice Poem :) Keti

Aarmione said...

Hi Keti. I think that your poem was very nice and it also rhymes. I think that if you want to write poems in the future, I would say that you should go for it.
Well done :)

keti said...

Thanks Puawai and Aarmione for your lovely comments

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